| Re: ACIM L130 "It is impossible to see two worlds." ~ May 9 (iambic pentameter) |
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Group: talk.religion.coursemiracle · Group Profile
Author: PieterPieter Date: May 10, 2008 07:00
> Gene chewbacca.org> wrote:>>> This one you can definitely correct in your books. :)
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>> Why the change, I wonder?
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> I suspect it was just a bit of haste from whoever,
> right at that particular moment, in not recognizing
> the original clever turn of phrase -- nor realizing the
> redundancy they introduced with the mistaken change. ;)
- Did not yet open your reply.
Yes: it is redundancy introduced.
In the correct version the iambic
pentameter is much more powerful.
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