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Author: Dennis M. HammesDennis M. Hammes Date: Mar 25, 2008 23:35
Orson Wells as CitizenCain wrote:
> "Dennis M. Hammes" arvig.net> wrote in message
> news:S_adnbuQBskKxHranZ2dnUVZ_rbinZ2d@onvoy.com...
> >>Orson Wells as CitizenCain wrote:
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>>>"Alacrity" hotmail.com...
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Author: RobRob Date: Mar 26, 2008 00:23
In message <9c3a9$47e9de0e$4c49bcfb$27266@ KNOLOGY.NET>, Will Dockery
knology.net> quacks>
>
>Then when I looked the quote up, I find that it was made about another poem,
>/The Plagiarist/, and I must have been stoned, since the poem /is/ a wordy,
>stilted and boringly obscure... a couple of nice bits I still like, and
>halfway understand:
>
Yeah, yeah, OB got ya to do the two-faced dance, AGAIN.
You must be his ooooozenet friend as well.
Rob
--
Rob Evans
When I see a swine
I reach for 45-calibre pearls.
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Author: OBOB Date: Mar 26, 2008 04:28
On Mar 26, 7:24Â am, "Dennis M. Hammes" arvig.net> wrote:> Will Dockery wrote:
>> OB wrote:
>
>>>"Will Dockery" wrote:
>
>>>>Actually, ''Ballad of Wispy'' uses A, D and E7, to a very different effect -
>>>>as do hundreds of other songs
>
>>>That prince of illiterate hicks, Will
>
>> Says Gerard Ian Lewis, the writer of some of the
>> most words I've ever seen -
>
> Too bad you can't read most of 'em, hunh.
>
> There was an old faggot named Will
> Who mumbled unspeakable swill.
> Â Â His ego grown bigger,
> Â Â He heard the word, "nigger," ...
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Author: OBOB Date: Mar 26, 2008 05:00
On Mar 26, 8:23Â am, Rob mla001.demon.co.uk> wrote:> In message <9c3a9$47e9de0e$4c49bcfb$27...@ KNOLOGY.NET>, Will Dockery
> knology.net> quacks
>>>Then when I looked the quote up, I find that it was made about another poem,
>>/The Plagiarist/, and I must have been stoned, since the poem /is/ a wordy,
>>stilted and boringly obscure... a couple of nice bits I still like, and
>>halfway understand:
"Stilted" he borrowed from an aapc poster this week: the jury is out
on what Will thinks it means. "Wordy", in Duckrish, means "containing
words", which is of course a good (Duckrish) reason to disqualify a
poem. "Boringly obscure" means "and worse, some of the words are not
in my dictionary!" Finally,. "halfway understand" means he just
figured out, at this point, that some of the words rhymed.
> Yeah, yeah, OB got ya to do the two-faced dance, AGAIN.
Two pieces of wood nailed together in a cross, plus a few strings, and
- high on a hill lived a Lonely Duck-turd.
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Author: David E. PowellDavid E. Powell Date: Mar 26, 2008 07:17
On Mar 24, 2:45Â am, "Will Dockery" knology.net> wrote:> "Orson Wells as CitizenCain" wrote:
>
>>"Alacrity" wrote:
>
>>> If you really object to what Will stands for, I would suggest you
>>> refrain from making such childishly inane attacks and employ your
>>> "skills" in support of him. That would hurt his image as opposed to
>>> helping it as you are doing now.
>
>> Apparently you know nothing about Histrionic Auto-erotic Crucifixion
>> Kinetics (HACK). Consider that for some among us, a wound is both
>> sense organ and erogenous zone. Consider also that your detachable
>> tongue may be plasticised, sharpened and used to pleasure the wrist
>> and ankle sites of his humiliation.
>
>> Dockery would just write a poem about being crucified.
>
> I already did, a couple of times, here's one... the chords are mainly ADA
> with E7s tossed in at the appropriate ...
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Author: Will DockeryWill Dockery Date: Mar 26, 2008 10:29
Gerard Ian Lewis wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>Then when I looked the quote up, I find that it was made about another
poem,
Not the poem on the blog I linked to, the ''Marriage Proposal'' poem:
http://www.vishvantara.com/?p=42
That the quote refers to - ''...Gerard Ian Lewis, the pompous, formerly
anonymous defender of racists and homophobes... not to mention the writer of
some of the most wordy, unreadable crap I've ever seen...''
But about another poem, /The Plagiarist/ -
>>/The Plagiarist/, and I must have been stoned, since the poem /is/ a
wordy,
>>stilted and boringly obscure... a couple of nice bits I still like, and
>>halfway understand:
>"Stilted" he borrowed from an aapc poster this week:
No, and this is the sort of thing you guys would whine ''liar'' about.
> the jury is out on what Will thinks it means.
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Author: OBOB Date: Mar 26, 2008 11:31
On Mar 26, 7:26Â pm, "Will Dockery" knology.net> quacked:> Gerard Ian Lewis wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>Then when I looked the quote up, I find that it was made about another
>
> poem,
>
> Not the poem on the blog I linked to, the ''Marriage Proposal'' poem:
>
> http://www.vishvantara.com/?p=42
>
> That the quote refers to - ''...Gerard Ian Lewis, the pompous, formerly
> anonymous defender of racists and homophobes... not to mention the writer of
> some of the most wordy, unreadable crap I've ever seen...''
>
> But about another poem, /The Plagiarist/ -
>
>
> ...
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Author: Will DockeryWill Dockery Date: Mar 26, 2008 11:47
Gerard Ian Lewis wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>>Then when I looked the quote up, I find that it was made about another
>
>> poem,
>
>> Not the poem on the blog I linked to, the ''Marriage Proposal'' poem:
>
>
>> That the quote refers to - ''...Gerard Ian Lewis, the pompous, formerly
>> anonymous defender of racists and homophobes... not to mention the writer of
>> some of the most wordy, unreadable crap I've ever seen...''
>
>> But about another poem, /The Plagiarist/ -
>
>>>>/The Plagiarist/, and I must have been stoned, since the poem /is/ a
>> wordy,
>>>>stilted and boringly obscure... a couple of nice bits I still like, and ...
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Author: OBOB Date: Mar 26, 2008 14:57
On Mar 26, 7:47Â pm, Will Dockery gmail.com> wrote:>
> Trouble is, Gerard, that you don't get that a poem has to entertain...
> which yours apparently didn't even manage to the two or three people
> who could even understand it.
That's a fair comment. It's the reason why I still expect to have to
slog at this for another four to five years before I start getting the
kind of results I want. That's normal, even optimistic. Most good
poets take decades to get their shit together.
> You're years away from coming close to what I do several times a week
> onstage and here on these newsgroups, entertain, and make sense doing
> it.
If you found my stuff entertaining I'd know I was doing something
wrong.
The only entertainment I've seen you provide on these groups is basic
slapstick, which you could find in any circus. Clown falls over; clown
hits himself with floppy stick; clown gets cold water poured down
trousers, etc.
> For example:
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Author: RobRob Date: Mar 26, 2008 19:27
>
>You're years away from coming close to what I do several times a week
>onstage and here on these newsgroups, entertain, and make sense doing
>it.
>
Be patient Billy - he's not as old, or as drunk, or as silly, or as out
of tune, or as uncoordinated as you. It will take him a while to master
slapstick so he HAS to settle for writing poetry. Just thank your lucky
(all-) stars that you being ridiculous means that you can entertain with
unspeakable shit without any hint of literacy.
Rob
--
Rob Evans
When I see a swine
I reach for 45-calibre pearls.
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