On 2008-01-26 20:00:16 -0600, "Aje RavenStar"
comcast.net> said:
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> "Bill Martin"
hotmail.com> wrote in message
> news:2008012614175316807-billrmartin@hotmailcom...>> Remember, like the year Rob entered, I cannot judge my own fic, so this is
>> up to those that have entered this year's NYC to judge...
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>> New Year's Challenge - Medium Omake Entry
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>> Team Deadly Redheads, Take 3
>> Genie - Rune Soldier Louie
>> Miss Yukari (a.k.a. Inspector Widget) - Nerima Daikon Brothers
>> Nami - One Piece
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> Alas, I only watched about two episodes of LOTL when it was on, and
> forgotten most of those. The only one of your team I'm familar with is
> Nami, and about the only thing out of character I see from her is no
> obsession with the crystals (since she generally is driven to acquire the
> most valuable items in any vicinity she happens to find herself, I would
> expect it to only take her five to ten days in the LOTL to locate, acquire,
> and catalog by color and weight every crystal available and to hell with any
> other priority or long term unbalance it might cause - and be thankful and
> regretting alternatively that Usopp isn't there to experiment with them for
> her to figure how what combo will do what).
Well... the only time in the fic that she has access to any major
amount of crystals was after we'd met Enik. Before that there just
wasn't that many available, since my fic never mentioned her entering
one of the pylons, just having her do what she does best, map out
since early on in the LOTL, knowledge is the most valuable item. I
specifically left the post-Enik and pre-exit era vague, since my only
knowledge of Nami is from the Shonen Jump run.
> I'd also have to be a lot more familar with LOTL to be able to judge if the
> time loop sequence you have at the end is accurate and closed properly.
> Sorry this isn't any real help, but no one has said anything yet, so I
> thought I'd throw out the few ideas I had in case it might start some
> dialogue.
Well, thanks for starting the dialogue then.
> Judgment: not qualified to make one.
