| Re: [FLUFF] New Year's Challenge - Team Bubba, Medium Challenge 2 of 2 |
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Group: rec.arts.anime.fandom · Group Profile
Author: Bill MartinBill Martin Date: Feb 16, 2007 13:08
On 2007-01-06 20:53:05 -0600, Bill Martin hotmail.com> said:
> On 2007-01-03 21:02:53 -0600, "Aje RavenStar"
> houston.rr.com> said:
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>>>> "Bill Martin" hotmail.com> wrote in message
>>>> news:2007010112455975249-billrmartin@hotmailcom...
>>>>> Okay, remember to post the fics in rec.arts.anime.fandom.
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>>>>> --------------------------
>>>>> MEDIUM CHALLENGE
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> [snip]
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>> (Comment - I am truly not as happy with this one as the Easy. It was
>> far too long and didn't flow naturally. Personally I'd stamp it
>> failed, although I do have a great like for one line in it, about 'the
>> gaijin booze fairy'. These have to be posted within a week, though, so
>> here it is. Otherwise I'd let it gather dust for a month and take a
>> second look.
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> I shall consult some tomes before I decide...
I know it took some time, but official ruling time!
Marller/Mara/whatever wouldn't just wait as Belldandy avoided
attacking. She would set her sights on defeating her. So, either
Belldandy dies, and you fail, or Belldandy finally attacks Marller and
you fail.
Sorry...
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