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Group: rec.arts.anime.fandom · Group Profile
Author: Bill MartinBill Martin Date: Jan 6, 2007 18:53
On 2007-01-03 21:02:53 -0600, "Aje RavenStar"
houston.rr.com> said:
>>> "Bill Martin" hotmail.com> wrote in message
>>> news:2007010112455975249-billrmartin@hotmailcom...
>>>> Okay, remember to post the fics in rec.arts.anime.fandom.
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>>>> MEDIUM CHALLENGE
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> (Comment - I am truly not as happy with this one as the Easy. It was
> far too long and didn't flow naturally. Personally I'd stamp it
> failed, although I do have a great like for one line in it, about 'the
> gaijin booze fairy'. These have to be posted within a week, though, so
> here it is. Otherwise I'd let it gather dust for a month and take a
> second look.
I shall consult some tomes before I decide...
> Far as the hard challenge goes, I conceed. Can't do it. The only
> approach I can think of for where I am in this situation is to show
> Spider-Carnage and his robot one of Su's artifacts and some footage of
> her in action, and tell them if they don't knock it off she'll be told
> of their abilities and where to find them - but that WOULD lead to the
> described undesirable result.
Yeah... 3 powerless old men are not a good match for Spider-Carnage...
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