Writing Advice from Neil Gaiman
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"The second draft is where the fun is. In a first draft, you get to
explode. The objective (at least for me) is to get it down on paper,
somehow. Battle through the laziness and the not-enough-time and the
this-is-rubbish and everything else, and just get it written. Whatever
it takes."
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"And then, on the second and subsequent drafts, you do four things. 1)
You fix the things that didn't work as best you can (if you don't like
the climactic Rock City scene in American Gods, trust me, the first
draft was so much worse). 2) You reinforce the themes, whether they were
there from the beginning or whether they grew like Topsy on the way. You
take out the stuff that undercuts those themes. 3) You worry about the
title. 4) At some point in the revision process you will probably need
to remind yourself that you could keep polishing it infinitely, that
perfection is not an attribute of humankind, and really, shouldn't you
get on with the next thing now?"