This is a translation from neapolitan language (Naples, Italy) to
american english.
Can anyone check it? Thanks in advance.

MOBSTER 1

LET'S GO AND HAVE A COKE STRIP AT 167 DEVELOPMENT COUNCIL BLOCKS.

THIS EVENING WE GOTTA DO A PIECE [OF WORK] BEHIND THE YELLOW SAIL
TOWER BLOCK.

I'M GONNA TAKE MY PIECE TUCKED IN MY WAISTBELT.

THERE WE GO FOR SOME FUN WITH A NICE STICK-UP AT CENTRAL POSTOFFICES .

LET'S RAID AND KNEECAP A COUPLE OF FAGGOTS AT BRIN STREET!

WE ARE THE SYSTEM'S WALYOES.

THIS MORNING WE'RE GONNA DO A MUGGING ON BUS ROUTE R2.

AFTER SHOOTIN' UP YOUR FIX , DO NOT DUMP THE SPIKE WE'LL BE USIN' IT
FOR A SNATCH.

THAT JAPON JERK HAS GOT THE WATCH I NEEDED, JUST KEEP A LOOKOUT FOR
ME.

THOSE FUCKIN' COPS JUST DON'T WANT TO LET UP.

WE CLEANED UP BULGARI'S BOUTIQUE WITH A BREAK-IN.

WE BAMBOOZLE AMERICAN CHUMPS BY THE THREE CARDS RESHUFFLE TRICK.

Hidalgo Vel

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Hidalgo Velázquez wrote:

In general, the translation is pretty awful, but I'd like to point out
specifically that you've used a lot of British Englishisms that are
unknown (except to Tony Cooper and such like) in American English. So
this wouldn't be quite as horrible as it is if your goal were to
translate to British English.

In particular, the following usages are very much British and
non-American:

(usage of "blocks" to refer to buildings)

Just a note -- in AmE that should be "three-card monte"; I'm not sure
about BrE.

Hidalgo Velázquez wrote:

After reading it, I decided I don't want to visit Napoli after all.

Hidalgo Velázquez wrote:

Gigi d'Alessio?
Seriously?

Peter Moylan wrote:

And I assumed that "neapolitan language" would come in three colours.

Walyoe stop shouting, please?

Mike M

On Mon, 23 Jul 2007 08:42:06 +0800, Robert Bannister
bigpond.com> wrote:

Cool, man!

Sti strunz pareno e frat ro cazz.
Uno gli dà importanza interpellandoli nella loro lingua del cazzo e
quelli si atteggiano facendo 'o iolo ncopp a munnezza...

Uè, Robert, here are three cards, choose the queen, come on!

Hidalgo Vel