then could you not ignore my poem, I've posted it all over and haven't
gotten one response,
like should I have stuck with the compacted assonance at the begging or
was it kind of relaxing as I found to open up and loosen up the collage of
sound I was creating,
Did I drop the ball of thought coming off the line live, laugh love like we
all know we should.. transferring onto what I thought was a relevant
corollary of living means to end and how often it gets so jumbled with end
to a means as so many things masquerad to be quite the opposite. And how
did you like my ending closing off the corollary offshoot thought of gadgets
of distraction, should I have made the poem longer and put a second ending
to the main body, or did it come off as a journey through a gasmine field
that I posted in alt.arts.poetry.urban