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Re: Writing an introduction to a website?         


Author: marika
Date: Aug 27, 2006 20:51

gekko wrote:
> I disagree.
> He is correct; it is not very dynamic.

No wonder I can't get published.... I have NO IDEA what people think is
dynamic.
COME ON!!!!

mk5000

'Tell the others
Your lovers
Better not be present tense
'Cause I want everyone to know'--christina aguilera, ain't no other man
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Re: Writing an introduction to a website?         


Author: chris_tine49
Date: Aug 28, 2006 08:41

marika wrote:
> gekko wrote:
>
>
>> I disagree.
>> He is correct; it is not very dynamic.
>
> No wonder I can't get published.... I have NO IDEA what people think is
> dynamic.
> COME ON!!!!

Well, that's more dynamic than anything in this thread so far.

And a good point.

I think in a website dynamic means that it calls you to do
something--react/interact in some way, even if it's just clicking on
buttons to see more or make a contact.

Movement and interaction=dynamic. So it's about engaging the readers,
pushing or pulling them. Friction and momentum.

It needs to take you somewhere.

Christine
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Re: Writing an introduction to a website?         


Author: Dr Zen
Date: Aug 28, 2006 18:12

On 28 Aug 2006 08:41:56 -0700, "chris_tine49@hotmail.com"
gmail.com> wrote:
>
>marika wrote:
>> gekko wrote:
>>
>>
>>> I disagree.
>>> He is correct; it is not very dynamic.
>>
>> No wonder I can't get published.... I have NO IDEA what people think is
>> dynamic.
>> COME ON!!!!
>
>Well, that's more dynamic than anything in this thread so far.
>
>And a good point.
>
>I think in a website dynamic means
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Re: Writing an introduction to a website?         


Author: marika
Date: Aug 30, 2006 15:11

Dr Zen wrote:
>
> We are not talking about what "dynamic" means "in a website" but what
> it means in a piece of writing. You are weaselling. Much better to
> shut the fuck up and move on.
>
actually, to be more accurate, i delete a lot of stuff before i read
it. i
do not get a lot of response to the stuff i post, so i am not inclined
to go
thru the bleating that passes for thought. not to mention
the ass kissers. you are the only one to comment on the notion of due
process towards writing. sometimes people miss the essentials. you
write for your audience or yourself. identify the audience first, then
i guess what dynamism means to you as audiene, or them. it can't be
the same definition every time.

mk5000

'unfortunately in life there are no shortcuts'--calamityphysics.com
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Re: Writing an introduction to a website?         


Author: Busy Guy
Date: Aug 30, 2006 15:55

"marika" gmail.com> wrote in message
news:1156975903.400051.270040@b28g2000cwb.googlegroups.com...
>
> Dr Zen wrote:
>
>>
>> We are not talking about what "dynamic" means "in a website" but what
>> it means in a piece of writing. You are weaselling. Much better to
>> shut the fuck up and move on.
>>
> actually, to be more accurate, i delete a lot of stuff before i read
> it. i
> do not get a lot of response to the stuff i post, so i am not inclined
> to go
> thru the bleating that passes for thought. not to mention
> the ass kissers. you are the only one to comment on the notion of due
> process towards writing. sometimes people miss the essentials. you
> write for your audience or yourself. identify the audience first, then
> i guess what dynamism means to you as audiene, or them. it can't be
> the same definition every time. ...
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Re: Writing an introduction to a website?         


Author: marika
Date: Aug 30, 2006 16:17

Busy Guy wrote:
>
> Every half-decade, the world turns out new wannabe writers. They are
> identifyable by their casual writing style.
> mostofthemeithedonotusepunctuationoruppercaseorelsetheyfailtodistinguishbetw
> eenparagraphs
>
and there's the bunch of us who have fucked up keyboards with ten year
old computers and we have to hit cccccertainkeys a dozzzzen times
before they workand the stupid spaceba r betrays us too. 2 cheep 2buy
a new one. and just forget the frekken caps that's deader than dead

ssssoooo how does that fit in with dynamism

mk5000

"You'll want to bring some Chinese clothes. They love that in Los
Angeles."--nell freudenberger, the dissident
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Re: Writing an introduction to a website?         


Author: Dr Zen
Date: Aug 30, 2006 16:24

On 30 Aug 2006 16:17:15 -0700, "marika" gmail.com> wrote:
>
>Busy Guy wrote:
>
>>
>> Every half-decade, the world turns out new wannabe writers. They are
>> identifyable by their casual writing style.
>> mostofthemeithedonotusepunctuationoruppercaseorelsetheyfailtodistinguishbetw
>> eenparagraphs
>>
>and there's the bunch of us who have fucked up keyboards with ten year
>old computers and we have to hit cccccertainkeys a dozzzzen times
>before they workand the stupid spaceba r betrays us too. 2 cheep 2buy
>a new one. and just forget the frekken caps that's deader than dead
>
>ssssoooo how does that fit in with dynamism
>

Pretty much what he said.

--
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Re: Writing an introduction to a website?         


Author: marika
Date: Aug 30, 2006 17:17

Dr Zen wrote:
>>
>
> Pretty much what he said.
>
aha

to the proposed writing, Just add Michael Jackson and all his
activist-fans
that are scheduled to go beat the crap out of each other at the giant
stadium.

then stir

duly noted

mk5000

''this wailing of tortured Americans''--Disco for the Departed
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Re: Writing an introduction to a website?         


Author: Dr Zen
Date: Aug 30, 2006 18:04

On 30 Aug 2006 17:17:58 -0700, "marika" gmail.com> wrote:
>
>Dr Zen wrote:
>
>>>
>>
>> Pretty much what he said.
>>
>aha
>
>to the proposed writing, Just add Michael Jackson and all his
>activist-fans
>that are scheduled to go beat the crap out of each other at the giant
>stadium.
>
>then stir
>
>duly noted
>
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Re: Writing an introduction to a website?         


Author: marika
Date: Aug 30, 2006 20:02

Dr Zen wrote:
>
> Smoking weed before posting always seems a better idea to the writer
> than to the reader.
>
>

never touch the stuff, was actually chomping a lollilop at the time

so i guess maybe you were referring to your state of sobriety, rather
than mine?

mk5000

'She'd raged at the last for scissors, as though she might still cut
some figure out of paper. She was ten. He'd had the fever himself
by then, and was tired. Go to sleep, he'd said, and left her. Not
believing any child of his could die so easily.
He remembered the dry grief cracking out.
--A Sudden Country, karen
fisher
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