First, work to meet girls in real-life first. Meeting women through
personals is only a secondary option.
Your Lordship wrote:
> Hi Guys,
> I would like to call upon the experience of the Guys and
> Gals in this Newsgroup.
>
> I really don't get it?
> There must be Women in here that would be willing to comment, and
> maybe they are best qualified to respond.
>
> I have paid for quite a while on a site,
A North American or Western site or something else?
> and don't seem to be getting,
> and results, as in not even 1 date.
> Its not the only site I have been on.
> I think I will post what I have put on the site.
> At the end of the day, I need to do a total makeover of my life,
> however painful, so if you are going to be brutal, then so be it.
> If we are going to be honest, could it be an Ethnicity or Religion
> issue?
>
> What is the answer?
>
>
> Thanks Guys.
>
> Me
> I am passionate about music, it would be good to meet someone with a
> similar musical taste. I have travelled and enjoy different cultures,
> and what they have to offer. I love relaxing with friends, or just
> simply playing the guitar.
This doesn't really say much and sounds like just about any other
profile most guys will put up, except it has an effeminate tone. Your
profile should vibe some level of masculinity.
Also, what is the topic line of your profile? The name you've chosen?
For all anyone knows you've chosen a name on the site of "VioletGayness"
and your topic line is "I'll bend over for truckers." Seriously, those
2 things, along with your main profile picture, are what create an
initial impression and the body of text in the profile is somewhat
secondary.
> Origin
> I was born in Iran,
If it's a orth American or Western site, you probably shouldn't state
that you were born in Iran. Political correctness aside, most women
will skip your profile once they read that. Let them find out about
your background when they first meet you.
> and have been in the Uk for nearly 30 years. I
> have travelled quite a bit, and lived in diffrerent parts of the Uk.
>
> My Religion
>
> Born again Christian
Leave religion blank. The words "Born again Christian" will, by itself,
cause you to get filtered out by 90%% of the women who didn't already
skip your profile after reading "I was born in Iran".
Also, you realize this newsgroup is for seduction and not mainstream
dating relationships, and that would mean the main methods involved
imply working towards sex as the goal, mostly. Is that even going to
jive with the "Born again Christian" thing?
> Place to go
>
> It would be nice to be by the river Windsors my fav. A small fishing
> village would lovely, thats still unspoilt, and traditional.
You need to get the grammar right on that. Like "be by the river
Windsors, which is my favorite place." Or just say "My favorite place
is by the river Windsors."
> A bar with live music would be good, with a good friendly atmosphere,
> so we could both feel relaxed and at ease.
OK but it's all still sounding a bit foofy and un-masculine. What makes
you different or better than any other guy on the dating site?
> Favourite things
>
> I love colours,
What the fuck is this? "I love colors". Girls write that in their
profiles. You might as well say "I faint when I see a pretty rainbow."
> as my Fav colour changes regularly, Spice, and heat is
> good, which pushes you're senses to the max.
What the fuck does that mean? I can't even make out the meaning of that
sentence. Just say "I love it when it's hot outside, my senses are
maxed out and I get a lot of energy from being out in the sun on a great
day, jogging, bicycling, or just a walk to my favorite places."
(presuming you actually jog or bike or whatever)
> Anything from Hot
> chilli's to the subtle flavour of fish. I like my big boys toys, as i
> enjoy messing around around with.
Huh?
Dude when you say "I like my big boys toys, as i enjoy messing around
around with." it SOUNDS like you're saying "I like playing with my
dick." Seriously, just spell out what you like. "I like taking my $WD
up a mountain. Working on a project in my shed. Fixing cars." be
specific. Don't say things that sound like like "I like boys big toy
dildos and messing with them. mmm"
> Literature
>
> I like to keep up to date with current affairs,
"I like keeping up with current events". See the difference in tone?
> whether it be online
Don't imply you surf online much, if at all.
> or by simply, just reading the tabloids.
You might as well be gay if you say that in a profile.
> I need to be up to date with
> the latest technology.
Don't say you NEED to be up-to-date with technology, it sounds like
you're a stay-at-home geek.
> The only book I still love has to be The Lion
> the Witch and the Wardrobe,
Yeah, dude, you're gay or something. Either that or you can't tell the
difference between a dating profile geared towards a gay audience and
one geared to men meeting women.
"The Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe"?
Maybe you could just say "I like putting on pink slippers when I'm at
home alone and dancing to an old Liza Minelli album while playing with
boy toys."
~Jay
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