On Aug 15, 1:22Â am, whyz...@
mail.com wrote:> On Aug 15, 1:13Â am,
whyz...@
mail.com wrote:> > > > > > >
http://www.time.com/time/magazine/
article/0,9171,956637,00.html> > > once there was a planet> > and then
it was gone> > sunk behind the waters of stillness and vast sublime
eternity> > > hold on....> > something is wrong....> > > the sun sinks
into the water> > > the earth stays where it is> > beneath our feet> >
> one day this will not be true> > > frozen water will rise above the
earth and grind all civilization back to calcium and lime stone> > >
and we will start all over again> > > magnitudes of time?> > >
exponential ratios of temporal accretions> > > and a debt and bill
longer than a paper towel to clean up an> > accidental poem that> >
didn't make it> > we didn't make it> > i'm mean you made it to the end
of the poem> > i didn't> > i erased a quarter of it and didn't even
poeticize anymore> > > just wondering why i am mimicking nemerov> > >
why am i mimicking nemerov?> > the planet won't die like my poem> the
planet will die like a song> a depressing song> shouldn't be a song if
its going to die> it should be a novel> or a textbook you throw away>
or at> the mp3 player> cause it was a rap song that just stopped
rhyming> stopped rhyming and> just started whining and complaining>
something about sending money for some dying trees> maybe they want to
make fake trees out of dollar bills> or maybe money makes good
fertilizer> there is a lot of bacteria on old currency> > Â http://
www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,956637,00.html> > there's
more> much more> and then there is less than nothing> just an empty
vacuous poem that once again became unrelated prose- Hide quoted text -
>> - Show quoted text -this is the final version of the poema typo
and a line added to help the imagerydon't read the first post and
replythis is the one to read again if you want to appreciate this
depressing messageand don't forget to read the howard nemerov poem
about ecological disaster at time
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