Hi Texas, Nice to meet you. Would love to know what your true moniker is--and the others would too. Sue or Alaric have the link to the group's FAQ. Overall, this isn't a bad start, though there are a few cliches and some wordiness. There are some passages that need to be cut. Sometimes you unnecessarily tell when you should be showing. Is this novel entirely about the afterlife? If you wouldn't
On Jul 16, 12:07 am, Janice <jan...@dixoncreekstudio.com> wrote: On Jul 15, 6:56 pm, Tif -Taf <tifere...@yahoo.com> wrote: In memory of my Father, a yahrzeit candle is burning bright. My father's name was Herszl Wolf. He died on July 14th, 1991 at 7:21 pm. The ocean became smooth as glass at the hour of his passing, and a wide golden beam of light lit the wall behind his
Pibbur wrote: I've been playing this game for a week now, with a bit more dedication, than the last time. I'm now at lvl 11, still in chapter 1. And strictly soloplaying. Here's my preliminary thoughts. Here's mine: A *week* to get to 11th level??? That's like a 2 hr starting session tops for a veteran player. Don't mean to rain on your parade & I really hope you're enjoying it (w/o
My dear Greg. Thank you, you are so kind and I am very grateful that you are seeking for truth. Thank you for forward me a book from a writer who don't even dare to tell the truth who he is. Before we discuss further, kindly please turn to page 14, and you will find this interesting statement. "....Because of the marvelous love of the bible God towards sinner, He came down to us in
<dottiekamaka@gmail.com> wrote On Mar 17, 6:57 pm, "Anopheles" <hi...@coolcats.net.au> wrote: This is the 4th episode. Of the last three (one incorrectly marked 4th) only Daniel (aka Alaric) has commented, others have drawn no comments. If there is no interest this will be the last episode posted. The Curse of the Grinning Cat Chapter Four Meeting the Wakeshi
