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Hey Amanda, I read the first version too, but I suffer thought paralysis if I read other people's reviews of the story before I write mine, so I don't know how much feedback had to do with your switching it to 3rd person. Although I had what I'd call a momentary problem with the sense of "then I die" at the end of the first version, it wasn't the same sort of problem I'd have with "then I died     

Group: alt.fiction.original · Group Profile · Search for Revised 1100 kinda in alt.fiction.original
Author: Becky Synk
Date: Sep 16, 2007 05:55

Sue wrote: On Wed, 20 Feb 2008 22:19:27 GMT, Myal <Dumaree@hotmail.com> wrote: Sue wrote: On Wed, 20 Feb 2008 13:09:49 +1100, Terryc <newsfourspam-spam@woa.com.au> wrote: RONSERESURPLUS wrote: AUSTRALIA would die without a lot of the $ they get from us, Err, can to show me the $$$ we get from the USA? I'd love you to keep the mormons, extract
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Group: alt.survival · Group Profile · Search for Revised 1100 kinda in alt.survival
Author: Myal
Date: Feb 20, 2008 18:42

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