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Group: alt.fiction.original · Group Profile · Search for More New Song Than Words in alt.fiction.original
Author: MerryKat
Date: Sep 11, 2007 17:12
On Sep 4, 6:47 am, MerryKat <MerryK...@yahoo.com> wrote: This is what I get for lurking. ;-> It's quick and dirty guys. Wrote it in a day. I'm not making any promises. One More Sad Song 823 words Away, she wanted to be, to get, away, far away, away from the clearing, away from the recent memory. Away from everybody and everything, she walked away, turning
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| MerryKat wrote:
> This is what I get for lurking. ;->
Glad you delurked!
> One More Sad Song
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> 823 words
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> Away, she wanted to be, to get, away, far away, away from the
> clearing, away from the recent memory. Away from everybody and
> everything, she walked away, turning into the woods, stumbling blindly
> up the hill. Pushing through branches and underbrush, heedless of
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Group: alt.fiction.original · Group Profile · Search for More New Song Than Words in alt.fiction.original
Author: Patrick
Date: Sep 10, 2007 19:23
Hi MerryKat, I'm short on time; I worked late tonight and my husband will want the PC in about a half-hour, so I'll critique as I go. One More Sad Song 823 words Away, she wanted to be, to get, away, far away, away from the No need for comma after "get." clearing, away from the recent memory. Away from everybody and everything, she walked away, turning into
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| On Sep 4, 9:47 am, MerryKat <MerryK...@yahoo.com> wrote:
> This is what I get for lurking. ;->
> It's quick and dirty guys. Wrote it in a day. I'm not making any
> promises.
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> One More Sad Song
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> 823 words
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> Away, she wanted to be, to get, away, far away, away from the
> clearing, away from the recent memory. Away from everybody and
> everything, she walked away, turning |
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Group: alt.fiction.original · Group Profile · Search for More New Song Than Words in alt.fiction.original
Author: Pensandpad
Date: Sep 5, 2007 18:52
This is what I get for lurking. ;-> It's quick and dirty guys. Wrote it in a day. I'm not making any promises. One More Sad Song 823 words Away, she wanted to be, to get, away, far away, away from the clearing, away from the recent memory. Away from everybody and everything, she walked away, turning into the woods, stumbling blindly up the hill. Pushing through branches and
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