kevirwin wrote: Is that your "objective opinion" Mikey??? Here's what you do then. Find someone (I'd say a friend, but we know you don't have any...mental giant like yourself. In that instance, the second phrase has no logical connection with the first three words. Hey Mikey, I just bumped this to the top, in case you missed it!! Your golden opportunity to show mw up again, don'...

Is that your "objective opinion" Mikey??? Here's what you do then. Find someone (I'd say a friend, but we know you don't have any) to read some of the "exchanges" between you and **anyone** else in this forum. Then ask that individual to be bluntly honest with you and to evaluate the dialogue between you and your protagonist as to: wit, coherence of thought, literary elocution, logical ...