Group: fr.comp.materiel.optimisation · Group Profile · Search for A Sam fic in fr.comp.materiel.optimisation
Author: Ludovic
Date: Nov 13, 2007 20:18
I've read some of your fics. If I have one criticism, it's that you don't spend long enough writing about Jo's breasts. Describe them in detail. Worship them. Write about Sam playing with them, kissing them, biting them, stroking them, rubbing her face against them, watching them wobble, etc. Half the story should be about them IMO. Hmmmm....have i not spent much time on them
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